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25th Apr 2016 in Chapter Two
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niccillustrates 25th Apr 2016, 3:00 PM edit delete
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Cornelia 27th Apr 2016, 2:09 PM edit delete reply
I love how your art developed in style from your first attempts to this. The comic is much more lively, there is an inner light in your coloring and the facial expressions are pretty intense. There is also an uprising story arc that draws me in, where your first and second attempt's pages could not catch me at all. You chose right to ditch the reader's distance to your subject and invite to an emotional point of view. Don't stop!
niccillustrates 28th Apr 2016, 9:45 AM edit delete reply
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This comment made me so ridiculously happy :'D I'm glad my art & writing has improved! This is the first story I've really written, so it's good to hear that my writing this time around is more interesting!